Monday, May 11, 2009

Can you please help me to reconstruct this words in marketing way?

"come and be there to smell the scents of herbs, enjoy the beauty of flowers and plants to harness the good chi in your homes and gardens. Salad lovers will surely enjoy the veggies while gastric hunters are sure to find delightful tarts and meaty burgers. array of hadicrafted bags and pillows are there for the taking. Farm tours are scheduled at 10am and 4pm. View the art of pot making and flower arranging. Timely enough to find gifts for valentines day."

Can you please help me to reconstruct this words in marketing way?
Inhale the scent of herbs. Enjoy the beauty of fresh flowers and plants. Bring the good chi back to your own home and garden. Salad lovers will rejoice in the array of fresh veggies, while gourmets will appreciate the delightful tarts and juicy burgers. Watch demonstrations of the arts of pot-making and flower-arranging, then visit our gift shop - our handcrafted bags and pillows make great gifts for Valentine's day!
Reply:The magnificent smell which arises from herbs,


while enjoying the beauty of flowers,


learn to harness the good chi in your homes and gardens.


With food for all Salad lovers will love the veggies,


But if you crave for meat you will bond to the delightful tarts and meaty burgers.


An array of hadicrafted bags to fill with pillows and more.


Our farm tours are scheduled twice a day,


10am and 4pm.


Watch and learn the art of pot making and flower arranging.


For your one true love on valentines day......


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